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DAY 28 CHALLENGE

29/1/2021

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I liked the idea of this challenge and looking at some of the ones already posted others did too!
I had to write a mundane conversation between two people and then, add the subtext of what really was going on in their minds, as they talked to each other.

So here is the mundane conversation:

Boy: Hi!           
Girl: Hi!
Boy: I was just …erm…
Girl: Yes?
Boy: I was just wondering if…
Girl: Yes?
Boy: I was just wondering if you’d…
Girl: Yes!
Boy: I was just wondering if you’d finished your history homework?
Girl: Oh!  Yes, I have!
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And here it is with the sub-text:
Boy: Hi!      
She’s so pretty!    
Girl: Hi!
OMG! He’s actually going to speak to me!
Boy: I was just …erm…
I should just ask her. She’ll most probably say no!
Girl: Yes?
Come on please. I’ve been waiting for my whole life for this- just ask me!
Boy: I was just wondering if…
No! I can’t. I’m such a dork! She’s way out of my league!
Girl: Yes?
Come on- you are so cute, so just ask me and I promise I’ll say yes.
Boy: I was just wondering if you’d…
 Take a deep breath! Go out with me sometime! Oh no, someone ‘s coming! Abort! Abort!
Girl: Yes!
Oh, here it comes, keep calm, be cool! Whatever you do, don’t overreact!
Boy: Erm…
Too late!
Girl:  I’m sorry what did you say?
Who’s that? Go away! Oh, just go away!
Boy: I was just wondering if you’d finished your history homework?
DORK!
Girl: Oh!  Yes, I have!
ARRGH!
 
 

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